Monday morning Tom and Sarah decided to go skydiving for their first time. They were Nervous and excited at the same time. They had to wear their suits to jump. First up was tom he was super super nervous but excited. In about 3 sec he jumped and landed On the target all the way on the ground. Then instructor called sarah up to jump she she was so nervous nervous and when she jump
great detail, next time add dialogue and more paragraph
ReplyDeleteNice job Lemeki,next time try to add more paragraphs but I like how you used a lot of detail
ReplyDeletewow that is a nice story next time use punctuation and paragraphs also detail and headings.
ReplyDeletewow lemeki you did good
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