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Thursday, 23 July 2020

sky diving narrative


Monday morning Tom and Sarah decided to go skydiving for their first time. They were Nervous and excited at the same time. They had to wear their suits to jump. First up was tom he was super super nervous but excited. In about 3 sec he jumped and landed On the target all the way on the ground. Then instructor called sarah up to jump she  she was so  nervous nervous and when she jump

4 comments:

  1. great detail, next time add dialogue and more paragraph

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  2. Nice job Lemeki,next time try to add more paragraphs but I like how you used a lot of detail

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  3. wow that is a nice story next time use punctuation and paragraphs also detail and headings.

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  4. wow lemeki you did good

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